投诉信重点句式

5我先写信向你表达对。。。。。的不满
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with …….
6我现写信向你投诉有关。。。。。
I’m writing to complain about…..
7我希望你注意到在。。。。。方面的一些问题。一方面。。。。。。另一方面。。。。。
There are some problems with …..but I wish to bring to attention. In the first place, ……In the second place, …….
8我抱怨的原因如下
The reasons why I complain are as follows.
11为了改善局面，建议采取以下措施。其一。。。。其二。。。。。
In order to improve the situation, It’s advisable to take the following measures. For one thing ……..for another, ……..
12 我希望问题可以尽早得以解决
I do hope that the problems will be solved as some as possible
13我希望你们能够考虑一下我的建议，以便改善局面
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration to improve the situation.

投诉信背诵范文

Dear Sir or Madam:
   I have recently received a number of complaints from customers about your fountain pens/ball pens. The pens are clearly not giving satisfaction in some cases we have had to refund the purchase price.
  The pens complained about are part of the batch of 400 supplied to our order. No.612 May 1. This order was placed on the basis of a sample pen left by your agent. We have ourselves compared the performance of this sample with that of the pens complained about and there is little doubt that many of them are faulty; some of them leak and others fail to write without making blots.
We are therefore writing to ask you to accept return of the unsold balance, amounting to 250 pens in all, and to replace them by pens of the quality our earlier dealing with you have led us to expect.
We trust you will consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the reoccurrence of such things.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Dear General Manager,
   During the week-long May Day holiday, my friends and I went to Beijing and accommodated our-selves at your hotel from May first to May fifth. I am sorry to tell you that we are not satisfied with your service, which makes me write this letter after considerations.
  The focus of our complaint is the following. Firstly, the surrounding environment is too noisy. Even at mid-night, the noise from the nearby construction sites is constant and great. Secondly, I must say something about your food. Your menu is very expensive and the food quality is not so satisfying. Lastly, I must remind you that you should strengthen the security. Sometimes, even salesman came to knock on our doors, which made us feel annoyed and unsafe.
 The above-mentioned points are the unpleasant experiences during our stay in your hotel. I hope you will adopt some new measures to improve your services, which can prevent the image from damaging.
 I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming